Amelia McElhinney Wilmington Grammar Sixth form Candidate number: 9070 Centre Number: 61119
This is strong but I still think you can develop the work further. Go back to the research, especially of the man against the blue sky, and re-visit the use of planning drawings. Do not keep that which is problematic.
This is strong but I still think you can develop the work further. Go back to the research, especially of the man against the blue sky, and re-visit the use of planning drawings. Do not keep that which is problematic.
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