This is with size 18 font which I prefer.
I then looked at the actual writing and I thought that they did not create a nice or well designed piece of writing so I choose to change it around. Below is the result.
I then looked at the colour, the writing is the colour of the wall below to keep the image tied in however I used the darker, but I think this is too dark so it tried the lighter colour.
I think this is too light so I believe my orginal colour was the best idea for the magazine.
I then spaced out my text so that it filled the entirety of the window however I think that this is too spaced out.
This together left me with the above image which is my final contents page.
Good work. See if you can tweak this a little bit more to develop the design into something excellent.
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