F16. Music Magazine: Evaluation of Second Draft of Front Cover

Improvements

1.The date needs to be in a better font and a different colour. It also must be aligned with the rest of the text in that third.

2.The black text (below '130 songs') is to dark, so it must be in a differnet colour to be seen more clearly.

3.The title of this section (yellow highlighted sections) is not floated so this myst be changed to fit with the designing rules.

4.The bullet points and writing need to be aligned together and be a better amount of space a part.

5.The right bottom corner is blank and needs something or interest to be put here or perhaps the barcode.

COmaprison to seventeen magazine

 The seventeen magazine still appears to be more apropriate for my target audience. It is bright and enticing with larger brighter letters. My photo that I have used is not as bright and bold as